Delts lookin' definitely better. I think, tho, that you have them too strictly teardrop shaped; the top sort of wraps around to the collarbone/shoulderblade. I shouldn't nitpick so, tho, since I still don't really draw how that works well.
Nice abs on the hockey pose. Yeah, I always notice those first XD Knee could stand to be turned a little bit, but good progress there. His species is unmistakeable with those proportions :-)
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Date: 2005-09-07 05:45 am (UTC)Nice abs on the hockey pose. Yeah, I always notice those first XD Knee could stand to be turned a little bit, but good progress there. His species is unmistakeable with those proportions :-)
Keep drawin'!